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WHO?	Malala  Yousafzai
WHAT?	She has been nominated for a nobel peace prize
WHERE?	he is from Pakistan but is living in England at the moment
WHEN?	Will find out at the end of October if she has won
WHY?	Because she was fighting to education for girls in Pakistan
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Headline:

Malala nominated for Nobel Peace Prize

Summary:

Malala Yousafzai has been nominated for a Nobel Peace Prize, for fighting for girls education in Pakistan. Even though she got shot by the Taliban for speaking about girls education she still has been fighting for equal rights. At the moment she is in England because her life is in danger and because she is waiting for an operation. The winners are announced at the end of October.

Opinion and Why: What do you think about this news and why

I think  that she was the youngest girl in the world to be nominated for the Nobel Prize because the average age is 62 to win it. She is a inspiration to all school girls in Pakistan by fighting for equal rights.

Questions What are some questions this article has prompted tat you may like to find out the answers to

How did it feel to be nominated to win. Was it hard fighting for freedom.

                                                   

North Shore

On Labour Weekend my brothers and I went to my sister's house down in the North Shore. As we where they my brother Vincent an I went next door to go and play at the park. When we got to the park we jump on out scooters ant went to the skate park it was by the play ground.

Me and Vincent went home and played on the xbox I always won.After that i pick up the phone and called my friend Raihan and talk to him about a game called Adventure Quest, it's a awesome game that you can kill monsters.

It was time for dinner we had a nice muscle chowder and fried bead it filled my tummy can't wait till breakfest.

Carlos & Raihan Report Of Sydney Tragic Fires

For some time a forest fire has been shoot in west of Sydney. The fire’s have been going on since 14 th of October. Many fire fighters have gone and try to help, and many have been sent to the hospital of serious burns. The temperatures has been getting higher which means worse fire’s, and means more people getting hurt.

Over 200 homes have been destroyed and over 100 were destroyed today. The fire’s have killed many people. One man named Walter Lindner try to save his house but tragically died on his way to the hospital.

Fire fighters will carry on shooting tons and tons of water until every bit of fire is gone.

Thanks to all fire fighters for helping Sydney.

Napier

This morning we look at our writing and fix it to make it better.

In the holidays my family and I went down to Napier, to see my brother. As we were going on our trip we went on a road called Dead Man's Elbow. It was a very big hill, with a big drop at the end. Finally we got to Napier I was so happy to see my brother. One of my favourite things to do while we were in Napier was to go and see a great leader named Tepania. She is a statue that sits on top of one of Napier fountain.

Our other favourite things to do was go swimming at the pools. I dived in the pool like a seagull gliding over the water and  landed like a dolphin it was so awesome. My brother and I played lots of games like ball tigge, tag, racing and much more. After playing in the water we went back to our nan’s and sat in the sun to dry off, before we went inside.

After staying a week in Napier it was time to go home. I said my byes to my family and we were off. It was going to be another long day getting home. It was awesome at Napier can’t wait to come back.

My Goals for writing is to add more speech and fullstops to make it sound better.                                      

Napier

This morning we had 40 minutes to write about anything we wanted. From this we are going to get some writing goals for this term. this is what I wrote.

In the holidays my family and I went down to Napier, to see my brother. As we were going on our trip we went on a road called Dead Man's Elbow. It was a very big hill, with a big drop at the end. Finally we got to Napier I was so happy to see my brother. One of my favourite things to do while we were in Napier was to go and see a great leader named Tepania. She is a statue that sits on top of one of Napier fountain.

Our other favourite to do was go swimming in the pool. I dived in the pool like a seagull gliding over the water and  landed like a dolphin it was so awesome. My brother and I played lots of games like ball tigge, tag, racing and much more. After playing in the water we went back to our nan’s and sat in the sun to dry off, before we went inside.

After staying a week in Napier it was time to go home. I said my byes to my family and we were off. It was going to be another long day getting home. It was awesome at Napier can’t wait to come back.