On Monday it was going to be an AMAZING day because we had camp. first we had to take our bags to the hall. After that we went to go and put on our togs to go kayaking with Miss Tele’a and Mr Burt. When we got there I just could not help my self. I could spirit off and jump in a kayak and paddle as fast as I could. But Mr Burt said "go sit on the sad and I will tell yours the rules" Then we could go. When I got on I had to do one leg in then my bum then the other leg that what Mr Burt said or if you what to fall over.
The waves sound like airplanes flying over the sky and there sound like slaps on your face when it hit the Kayak. After that Mr Burt said we could jump off the huge rocks that were there. It was so fun first I did a V bomb then a cannonball when I landed in the water it felt nice and refreshing. It was just about to rain so we had to pack up and leave but it was still fun.
TO BE CONTINUED.........
Hey Carlos,
ReplyDeleteSwimming in the ocean always is nice and refreshing glad to hear you enjoyed yourself :)
It sounds like you had a fun time at camp. You might want to look at your spelling and which words you've used to tell us when things happened.
I can't wait to hear about the rest of your camp.
Have fun and keep writing :)
Hey Carlos,
ReplyDeleteI like your amazing writing that you wrote it is nice will swimming I can start of there with it is always a refreshing way to enjoy your camp. What I like is that your writing is pretty interesting and that I want to here more about your lovely writing
:):):):)
Jessica P
Hey CarlOS
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put that AMAZING word in the beginning of your writing next time try putting punctuation in your writing to make it more interesting. "Keep on trying".